Sunday, December 16, 2012

A Snog from Worth a Thousand Words: Unedited Excerpt

Welcome to my Sunday Snog. Don't be shy, cause there are other lovely snogs to be had... follow THIS BLISSELINK back to the home of the original Sunday Snog, and then when you're done reading all the Victoria Blisse goodness there, move along to the other yummy snogs waiting for you there. :) Enjoy!


Adrien turned to his side, a low sound spilling out of him. He reached out blindly, snagging a pillow and pulling it over his face. Devon growled, his hands already flicking open the buttons of his faded Levi jeans. “Adrien, I don’t mind undressing us both, but if you like what you’re wearing I suggest you take it off yourself. I don’t have a lot of patience right now, and I’m liable to tear something.”
Devon waited for a moment as he toed off his sneakers. They hadn’t spent a lot of time together yet, but he had a pretty good sense of the guy. Unless he was mistaken, what he’d just said was gonna light Adrien up like a roman candle. He smirked, and started counting.
Adrien’s arm flung out, slinging the pillow off his face as he reared up. If he hadn’t been watching for it, the little bugger would have clocked Devon right across the mouth. Devon caught Adrien’s flailing arm, a wicked smile curving his mouth as he followed the line of firm flesh back up past his brand new boyfriend’s beautifully muscled shoulder to the biteable line of his throat.
“Do you want to keep that shirt?” Devon heard the dip in his voice as the thought of ripping all the buttons off Adrien’s shirt to get to his well-defined pectoral muscles. Saliva pooled in his mouth and Devon swallowed hard. Adrien’s suddenly wide-eyed gaze swept over Devon’s chest. When he raised his eyes back up to Devon’s face, his eyes were hot and wet looking.
“It’s never been one of my favorites.” The husky timbre of Adrien’s voice sparked the dry tinder of Devon’s lust, setting him utterly aflame. He pushed his jeans and briefs to the floor, stepping on the hem of one leg with the other foot. As he crawled up onto the bed, he used his newly freed leg to push the pants fully off. Crawling up along Adrien’s body, he stopped to place a nipping bite on the thin line of flesh visible between the jean’s waistband and shirt’s hem of Adrien’s clothes.
Adrien made a shocked squeaking noise. Devon’s heartbeat pounded in his ears. Adrien’s bed smelled of the coconut scented shampoo the younger man used, and nothing else. Devon’s dick hardened in a rush. He pushed up above Adrien’s lithe form, drawing his legs up until he kneeled with one leg on either side of Adrien’s slim hips. Sitting back on his heels, Devon gripped the collar of Adrien’s shirt. He fingered it for a moment, noting the sturdy cotton fabric as the backs of his fingers smoothed against the sides of Adrien’s throat. “No. I don’t want to give you a brush burn from your shirt.”
Trembling, Adrien lifted his hands up to rest them on Devon’s thighs just above his knees. “Okay. Just—get it off of me. Please.”
Devon’s breath slammed out of his body. He closed his eyes for a split-second, closing away the vision of Adrien’s molten gaze. Doing so only intensified the sensation of Adrien’s fingers alternately gripping and stroking his legs. Devon slipped the buttons free as quickly as his fingers could move. The last one came free, and he pushed the dull green fabric of Adrien’s shirt aside, sliding his hands around Adrien’s sides. He pushed them up and under, lifting Adrien’s pale olive skin up to his hungry mouth.
Adrien gasped as Devon’s mouth closed over the edge of one collarbone. Devon nipped and sucked his way along Adrien’s flesh until he found the sweet dip just between the two collarbones. He licked and kissed that spot, pulling back to touch one finger to the little hollow. “This is mine. Always mine, no matter where you go or anything that ever happens between us, this spot is mine.”
Devon turned his head then, drawn to bite the tender place where Adrien’s shoulder met his neck. Running his teeth over the area, he bit down lightly. Adrien moaned, and the broken off sound unleashed something savage in Devon. He growled, pushing one hand higher up under Adrien until he gripped a fistful of hair at the nape of the smaller man’s neck. He lifted his torso away far enough to rake his eyes over Adrien from face to chest to waist, and the delightful denim covered bulge below. He snarled, jerking Adrien up against his chest. Sealing his mouth over Adrien’s, he licked along the seam of the Adrien’s closed lips. Adrien whined, opening his mouth immediately.
Inside he tasted of honey and something nutty. Devon moaned this time, low and hard, as a wave of burning need swept through him. He needed in Adrien. Now, he needed in right god damned now. 

If you want the  tale of how Adrien and Devon met and got together, download my free short, The Counterfeit Claus over at allromanceebooks --and consider it an early Christmas present, from me to you. :)


  1. Done and done--thank you so much, it looks excellent!


  2. Wow super hot edition to Sunday Snog from your writing cave thanks x

  3. First time visitor to this site. Enjoyed the visit

  4. Very tantalizing tidbit that I'm grateful to you for posting. Thanks too for the freebie and being a part of the giveaway!

    joderjo402 AT gmail DOT com

  5. Oh boy! Another one for the wishlist.

  6. Hello Cherie,
    Thank you so much for the Gift of your Book,
    " The Counterfeit Claus", I will very much enjoy reading how Adrien and Devon met and got together. Thanks also for sharing the snog from "Worth a Thousand Words", it was really HOT & I love your Cover Art, very Sensual Eye-Catching ManCandy ;)
    Take Care, Merry XxxMas & Stay Naughty,
    PaParanormalFan (Renee)
    paranormalromancefan at yahoo dot com

  7. Thanks everyone, please be sure to let your friends know about the free read! It's a gift for everyone who will enjoy it. :)

  8. Thanks for the Christmas gift Cherie. Now I know what I'm reading in bed tonight.

    drainbamaged.gyzmo at

  9. Sounds very good! Love the cover too! Thanks for sharing! Happy holidays! Best wishes and many blessings to you!


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